Blog Assignment#3 Reflection of Peer Review

Advice that I think is the most helpful is that I need some more dialogue and sensory image because my story didn't have, yes but is to less. I learn from reading other student's work is they writing have a lot of detail, I liked it.

Blog Assignment #2 Writing Reflection

Blog Assignment #2 Writing Reflection

Look at your test drive(personal narrative writing from last week).  Tell me what you think you did well.  How can you improve the next time you write a personal narrative?  Was you personal narrative interesting?  Why or why not?  What grammar errors did you make and how will you correct them in the future?

what I did well ís I given a lot of details. What i should improve on is i need to write in past tense. My personal narrative is interesting because it really funny and excited. The grammar errors did i make, i will correct by looking back my first test drive and correcting the grammar in the future

Assignment 1: Summer Reading

My autobiography is normal, not so good, and not so bad. What I do well is I didn't play with my hands and put my hand in the back. Thing that I need to improve on is I need to make the speech more interesting and more details. My feedback is don't play with your hands during the speech.

The discussion was good. My favorite books genre is manga because manga is comics and I do really love comic like Dragon Ball Z and Slam Dunk. Some people in the my discussion group talking about romance books, and dancing books.

One of mine summer reading books are Dragon Ball Z, Fever, and The BFG. I think some of my friends will enjoy this book. Person that like this kind of books is a comics lover because everyone in the world are love comics. For example: Japan, Vietnam, etc.